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June 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
very well thought out story its one in a billion compared to most, except you need to do a lot of spell checks every now and then when your writing the next chapter. It's an interesting alternate reality story overall to say the least.
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April 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's a good story but a little..... skippish and disjointed in some areas. That's the only problem I have with the story. Well, that and the fact that you haven't told us why Shaggy's letters hadn't been getting to the rest of Mystery Inc.
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October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
More chapters please and do scooby has someone.
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February 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is very good! I like the twist on Shaggy. I want to know what his job is and what he's been doing for the past 2 years. I like Winter too.
This story is very well-written, but I think it can use more scenes of Shaggy and the rest of the gang talking about the past and about the reasons why they weren't able to get together during that time. Please add more to this soon.
This story is very well-written, but I think it can use more scenes of Shaggy and the rest of the gang talking about the past and about the reasons why they weren't able to get together during that time. Please add more to this soon.
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December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you realy need to add moor chapters to this stoory becas it is so interesting
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December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GRRR! Why do the fics tht are getting realy good always seem to have cliff hanger endings? Plz update soon!
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November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this story haD ME WATING FOR MORE IT IS ALOT DIFERENT FROM THE ONES YOU USUALY SEE ON THIS SITE BUT GOOD NONE THE LESS IT COULD USE SOME SPELL CHEK AND GRAMER CHECK
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August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think this is a great story. Please continue!!
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April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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December 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay great story, but before I say anything else, I love the authors notes! okay. great story(again), but where did the money come from, and how did this all happen. DETAILS PLEASE!