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for The Uncensored Jungle Book

by Ulrik

person Oi
schedule May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ehm.....what's with the ballons, man?

Hold, on, hold on, let me give your style of writing a try.....

*Review writen in author's style of writing*: I thought your story was stupid, pointless, and poorly written, but it make me horny. So I think think i'll inflate this this balloon and suck on it until my fluids run down me like a waterfall.

woah......at least attempt to write stories that make a little bit of sense! And what's with not putting any warnings on that story? That thing was PWP, Beast, Ped, and a thousand other things.
person Daishi
schedule May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What the fuck?
person Argento
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think I'm gonna cry...
person L-Monty
schedule February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
After I got through reading the fic i'm a bit confused.
person Crystal
schedule December 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
..... no comment what-so-ever.
person ham
schedule September 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Do have a problem with baloons?
person shawtii
schedule July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
;.; the balloons confused me
person xanvega
schedule March 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this story made no sense... what was tholehole thing with balloons. It was too confusing.
person GIrl InTerUpPtEd
schedule February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear
person LionessLustLover
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting...but what's wite bae balloons?