Reviews for Two Of Us - Cartoons

person xXxKikuxXx

schedule March 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM

This story was so good, I'm not sure what to call it. One of the best written IZ fics I've read for sure, with a well fitting ending. I loved how the characters acted. Gir and Deen were so cute. :]

kiku

person Genave

schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM

Alright. The first thing I want to say is that I've been waiting to make an account until I had a couple stories written to post on this site. However, your story compelled me to do it sooner.

I almost cried, this story was so good. This is the first fanfic I've ever reviewed. The plot was original, the characters in character when they should be (and out when they shouldn't). Not only your creativeness, but your writing is wonderful as well. Too many times have I read a summary of a plot that is promissing only to begin reading the fic and almost vomit because of the lack of any sort of grammar or effort.

I absolutely love this story. Obviously one of the best fanfics I've ever read. Please keep up the great work!

-Genave

person Fin

schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM

hm. it was a beautiful story, full of lovely, thoughtful writing, and deep emotion. still, i don't know if that was the ending i was looking forward to. honestly, for some reason it was a little bit of a let down. you did a good job of expressing Dib's emotions at finally seeing Zim, but i think, with all that he and his family had been through, you could've pushed it a bit more. i think the problem is the ending is a but rushed or short, and a little more closure is needed. still, it doesn't really detract too much from such a moving and lovely story. i'm glad you at least finished it instead of leaving it to die.

person CtQ

schedule August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM

what an amazing story.. i really mean it. not a lot of things get me so worked up emotionally. i even cried in the last couple of chapters. It's so incredibly BELEIVABLE. it's astounding how everyone is so perfectly in-character. not a lot of fanfiction authors can do that with the cast of Invader Zim.

just.. beautiful. i can't find words that really express my feelings about this story.
Thank you so much for writing this story and sharing it here with all of us.

person Herme23

schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM

Oh...my...goodness!!!!! I read this story so long ago, when it ended with just chapter five and I was so sad to find that Zim had died and poor Dib was all by himself!!!! Gods, thank you, thank you, thank you! for posting up the finale!!! I'm so happy now! This was so enjoyable to read, then and now, thanks again. Yours Herme

person one-eyed jester

schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM

That was beautiful. I was so sad though when it happened. It was tragic and realistic. I could imagine all this actually happening. I love it and i think i'm going to go cry now. Thank you for posting this story.

person Tamago

schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM

Thats so saaaaaad! Please don't tell me it's over! *Cries* 10-10 I love tragic stuff...T.T

person Goat

schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM

Oh...oh, wow. That was unbelievably powerful; it left me numb. I am stricken of words.

Gah... I do hope you find time to complete this. I hate to be left hanging after being so very engrossed...

person Aveline

schedule June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM

This story is so moving. You make every part of it come alive. So sad! But it's very good. Still, I do have one problem: you need to update!!!! Oh please please please! I'm hoping for a happy ending, but I'll take anything at this point. I need more. I'm going to go cry over this story now. Please please please please update!!!!

person Fate

schedule October 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM

You are evil. Pure utter evil! You had me addicted to that story and then look at what you did! noo! How very mean. very very mean. Good. BUT MEAN

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