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October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O_o.........oh my God....YOU HAVE EXCELLED! XD Even though this was really short...I loved it...well the second chapter, the first chapter I felt like hugging my Nala plush. ^^; Poor Nala-chan. BUT, I looooooved THIS part of all.
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Simba walked over to his meerkat pal and pushed him down onto the rock. Then he extracted a claw and stuffed it up the kat's ass, pumping slowly. Timon writhedpleapleasure as Simba fucked him. He shut his eyes, then they popped open as Simba applied his tongue to his cock. The meerkat came immediatly.
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Shimi: XD Oy. I think I was starting to jack off as well on that........is that good or bad? (O_o?) YOU my friend have excelled in Lion King p-p-p-POOOORRRN! (pauses and looks around) Awww shit...I have to clean up this mess...GOTEN! STOP PLAYING WITH IT!
Goten: (off-screen) Sorry.
Shimi: *sigh* Now I gotta clean my floor...STUPID KETCHUP! XD I love it when Timon got-um-claw fucked?
Goten: O_o? What the hell?
Shimi: ...whaaat? I can't help it! And so for the scene when Simba-erm-claw/whatever-fucks Timon...I give this fic a five out of five. (waves) Bye!
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Simba walked over to his meerkat pal and pushed him down onto the rock. Then he extracted a claw and stuffed it up the kat's ass, pumping slowly. Timon writhedpleapleasure as Simba fucked him. He shut his eyes, then they popped open as Simba applied his tongue to his cock. The meerkat came immediatly.
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Shimi: XD Oy. I think I was starting to jack off as well on that........is that good or bad? (O_o?) YOU my friend have excelled in Lion King p-p-p-POOOORRRN! (pauses and looks around) Awww shit...I have to clean up this mess...GOTEN! STOP PLAYING WITH IT!
Goten: (off-screen) Sorry.
Shimi: *sigh* Now I gotta clean my floor...STUPID KETCHUP! XD I love it when Timon got-um-claw fucked?
Goten: O_o? What the hell?
Shimi: ...whaaat? I can't help it! And so for the scene when Simba-erm-claw/whatever-fucks Timon...I give this fic a five out of five. (waves) Bye!
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September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O....K.....I'm freaked out...
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January 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is fucking sick dude i thougth it had to do with simba and nala and to make it worse this is a disney film you made this into a sick homosexual multi specie porn fic its gross yuck and simba licking a pigs ass whole its wrong what the hell is your problem
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March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I guess I shouldn't let this pass, seems to how the other reviews are clamoring for more. You've taken a _children's_ story and made it into an X-rated porno. Not only that, but it contains underage sex as well. Please, learn to write sex scenes, they usually last longer than a couple of paragraphs and are at least somewhat descriptive. And in the second chapter, it's incredibly poorly-formatted as well. I will never understand most of the people on this site.
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March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Blah!
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March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
tirstirst one was wrong and the second one was funny just the way i like my stories
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March 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YOU REALLY NEED TO MAKE MORE LION KING STORYS THERES ONLY FOUR I NEED MORE MORE STORY'S MORE CHAPTERS
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February 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh...My...God...
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February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*laughs hysterically* I love you for chapter two.
*laughs some more*
I always thought that Timon and Pumbaa were more than just friends, but I was surprised that you had the balls to write that. I would have a hard time doing that, myself. I might have been able to do it if they were human, but they're animals... *shrug* Anyway, thanks for the laugh.
*laughs some more*
I always thought that Timon and Pumbaa were more than just friends, but I was surprised that you had the balls to write that. I would have a hard time doing that, myself. I might have been able to do it if they were human, but they're animals... *shrug* Anyway, thanks for the laugh.
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February 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Definitely a good reason as to why Nala would actually leave to find help, a good motive.