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person RGBsilly
schedule June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
(Giggling like an idiot) Oh my god! That was so funny! Poor Janine. She has to put up with a lot from the guys and that just took the cake. I love how Egon shoves the picture into his pocket as if to say "It's mine!" And he sees her handwriting on the back of it. She knew he'd end up with it. (Giggles again) Those Two! O_^
person BillysGirl
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I gave this story a couple reads, and laughed both times! :D Such embarrassing situations!

Though, I'm not sure Egon would say "rack". But it did provide a funny WTF? moment there. :D
person hondafan
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey that was pretty good and I like it very much. Keep up the great work.
person Evil Overlord
schedule November 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this was *wonderful*! You had me laughing through the whole thing! Poor Janine, surrounded by a bunch of guys....*G* Well done, very well done!!
person Shy Lurker
schedule January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story! Very funny and well plotted. Did your research too, which is MUCH more than a lot of these canon-challeneged writers aspire to.