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December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was one of THE BEST KP FICS I'VE EVER READ! That was awesomely wicked! Words can't describe how fantastic this fic was! MORE! MORE! MORE! XD! XD!
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December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude, do I really have to say it, SLAMMIN' FIC !! MAJOR lemon at the end, me likey :-)
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December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YES! Finaly, man I was wondering if you were ever going to continue this story. I'm so glad you did, its really cool. I just hope the next chapter won't take as long. Anyway later :)
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December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The story is great; it does seem to be a more...adult version...of the series.
A small bit of advice: The narrator voice(that's you) should avoid using words like "pussy". It makes the story less satisfying. Nonetheless, I understand that it's your first lemon.
Keep it up.
-- acsound
A small bit of advice: The narrator voice(that's you) should avoid using words like "pussy". It makes the story less satisfying. Nonetheless, I understand that it's your first lemon.
Keep it up.
-- acsound
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December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
damn that was tight made me want to cum
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December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i challenge you to write a story about ron shego and kim and kims mom and ron mon in a chapter of this store
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December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have no idea how long I've waited for this.
Well, you can probably guess it's been since I read the first parts, but still.
Anyway, good job.
Well, you can probably guess it's been since I read the first parts, but still.
Anyway, good job.
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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Long wait,but a good finish. I really enjoyed it. Thanks, and keep it up.
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December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, the story hadn't been abandoned! Sweet! Love the Ron/Kim interaction, since I'm a big shipper (which, it turns out, is the ship in the series. Can't wait til the next season where Ron and Kim are dating!). I must admit, I've always thought Shego was going to go over to Kim and push Ron's seed into her mouth at the beginning of the chapter. Fooled me! Now, they just have to turn the table on Shego somehow.....:)
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December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm resubmitting my review because it seems Adultfanfiction.net lost the previous one. :(
I like this story very much, and I'm looking forward to the final chapter with a lot of K/R smuff! Kim and Ron definitely will bang each other senceless before arriving home. Please get the next chapter up soon. :)
I like this story very much, and I'm looking forward to the final chapter with a lot of K/R smuff! Kim and Ron definitely will bang each other senceless before arriving home. Please get the next chapter up soon. :)