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December 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was very well done for your first lemon! You must continue B/C I can't wait to readt hat happens next! Please update soon!! It's an awesome story keep going
Happy reader!!
Happy reader!!
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December 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I like this first chappy I hope you update soon cause I will be waitin'
JA NE!!!!^_^
Lurrain~*~
JA NE!!!!^_^
Lurrain~*~
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December 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great details (but try to get some more in) and excellent plot. Can't wait for next chapter!!!
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December 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You absolutely have to update this. The detail is great...very erotic and captivating! I have to find out what happens to Ron now. Also can't wait for the KxR action. Update soon!
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December 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOW!! VERY GOOD!!! MORE PLEAS!!!
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December 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
not bad! right more soon. KP and Ron getting it on would be awsome!
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December 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I agree with everyone else who reviewed so far. Continue this at once! I espically enjoy the idea of the R/K pairing later on in the story.
If ROn's session is anything like Kim's, he's history.
If ROn's session is anything like Kim's, he's history.
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December 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
What can i really say but WOW this was great and from what ive seen of the show both in character and a very likely situation to occur i look forward to the next chapeter and esspecialy the hinted K/R pairlatelater.
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December 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Nice little story so far. Kim and Shego seem to go together, don't they?
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December 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Looks great so far, detailed, concise, and very erotic. Can't wait for the rest of it.