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November 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was a great story i really enjoyed all of ur works i hope you post more and i hope u expand beyond the universe of kim possible i would love to see your take on sum other disney toons :) keep writing
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December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have read all four chapters at this point. This is one of the very best erotic stories I have come across involving Kim and Ron, so I was quite disappointed that you have decided to end it. I hope you will reconsider. If I might suggest how to continue the story have Shego blackmail Kim and Ron into continuing to have sex with her and maybe even trying to turn them into her sex slaves.
P.S. Another kinky suggestion, should you rewrite chapter 3, after Shego gives Ron the blowjob have her go back over to Kim and share Ron's cum with her.
P.S. Another kinky suggestion, should you rewrite chapter 3, after Shego gives Ron the blowjob have her go back over to Kim and share Ron's cum with her.
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November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
most excellent!
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November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice way to close out one of my favorite stories by you.
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September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nice lemon, like the fact that though you gave allowed us the K/S fantasy but still kept the reality that both of them were forced into the sitch. They lost themselves in it along the way, thats for sure, but they still weren't likin (specially Kim) the loss of control.
Also liked the fact you stayed true to the K/R pairing all throughout the fic, that was cool. Hope you do the extended scene. Find it kinda funny Shego's such a slut but hey, the whole thing wouldn't work if she wasn't the horniest bitch on the block...;)
Nice Job, Drakken threat from Shego kinda kinda had me lose my "buzz" for a sec. Gah! That would be like Kim getting raped by her FATHER, just Sick and Wrong!
Keep up the good work, adios.
Also liked the fact you stayed true to the K/R pairing all throughout the fic, that was cool. Hope you do the extended scene. Find it kinda funny Shego's such a slut but hey, the whole thing wouldn't work if she wasn't the horniest bitch on the block...;)
Nice Job, Drakken threat from Shego kinda kinda had me lose my "buzz" for a sec. Gah! That would be like Kim getting raped by her FATHER, just Sick and Wrong!
Keep up the good work, adios.
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August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nice story. There are a few pretty critical typos in chapter two and I think one as well, that I couldn't decipher, but other than that it was great. I have a real thing for strong dominant women, so this is naturally my kind of story. Look forward to any future updates.
-Jawelik
-Jawelik
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July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is one of your hottest KPs ever.
I hope to see the conclusion before summer's over and its bact to school or work for everyone
I hope to see the conclusion before summer's over and its bact to school or work for everyone
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved it and I was wondering if you plan on doing more stores like this one about kim and ron
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January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was one really good story i cant wait for the next chappi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
pretty good but you could use more descriptive words as of pussy and other stuff.