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January 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
random hyper person: MORE! please update! PLEASE!!!!!
Dark Jak: SICK! *goes back to throwing up in the corner*
Willow: UPDATE!
Dark: oh my god how can you read that?! Let alone want it updated?!?! Whats wrong with you people?!
RHP: we're fangirls! its what we do!
Willow: Yeah!
Dark Jak: SICK! *goes back to throwing up in the corner*
Willow: UPDATE!
Dark: oh my god how can you read that?! Let alone want it updated?!?! Whats wrong with you people?!
RHP: we're fangirls! its what we do!
Willow: Yeah!
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June 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
real good story. write chapter 5 soon.
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January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
... ... ... Um...Yay? ... Purple's turn! >.<;; *shrugs stupidlly* My only complaint is that a couple times you failed to insert the " " marks, so I had no idea what was ACTUALLY spoken...o.O; But....um...Any explenations on your view of irken anatomy? It's always interesting to get another view of such.
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December 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ooooooooh...... Good job. But it seems you need to improve upon making your letters capital at the begining of sentences. Other than that, I haven't noticed any other flaws at all. Keep up the good work. Hope to read more soon.
~*~ Taryn the Tiger ~*~
~*~ Taryn the Tiger ~*~
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December 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ANOTHER WONDER FROM Jkiatelli!! Have you written anything else? Do you have a FF.net account? If you do I'd love to read more of your stuff!
love
The Angel of Death
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love
The Angel of Death
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December 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ha.. thanks for the reviews, Angel..Sorry I used to have an account with Fanfiction.net, but the mods got pissed at me for writing Lemons N' Limes after the stupid ban of that stuff..Anyhow.. sorry guys about the bad punctuation in my stories as of recently but I lost microsoft word due to a compy crash and am currently using word pad, but that'll change when I get enough energy to get my ass down to download.com for a fresh new word processor.
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December 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is getting really good. I look forward to reading the next exciting chapter of this story. Will Dib kill Tak? Will he? TELL ME!!! Heh heh, just kidding. I'll wait. You know what would be good? If Tak sided up with Dib and they both got together to go out and kill Zim. Of course, you don't have to use that idea... I'm sure you already have a great idea for the next chapter. But that's wehat reviews are for, right? ^_^
Well, gotta go. Good luck on the next chapter! Bye byes!
~*~ Taryn the Tiger ~*~
Well, gotta go. Good luck on the next chapter! Bye byes!
~*~ Taryn the Tiger ~*~
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December 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Pretty interesting so far. A lot of grammatical errors, but they don't detain from the reading, so it's not that bad. At least you spelt okay; it just seems you got lazy with capitalization. Anyway, can't wait to see more.