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for Foundations Laid

by Parareru

person Jayman
schedule December 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yeah I checked FF.Net and your fic was gone. Luckily, I first read this here in AdultFanfiction so I knew you probably updated here. This is the best lemon fic I've read...hands down. No way this is PWP. I look forward to the next chapters of this fic.
person Classic Cowboy
schedule December 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
bout time those two got together. so two chapters andpi lpi left. looking forward to seeing how this all plays out ^^
person Rick
schedule December 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Reading Chapter 5, you threw me for a loop. Just when I thought this was going to be a psychlogical S & M, you introduce some sort of psychic power!
person KPFan
schedule December 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!!!!!!!! It's really sad, but wonderfully written. You almost had my crying at Kim's reaction when she thought she was being raped by someone other than who it was. Please continue SOON!!
person Classic Cowboy
schedule December 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this is the best adult KP fic on the site right now! keep up the great work, how's Ron and Kim going to get out of this? update faster!
person Jayman
schedule December 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well written. I loved it. You have no idea how happy I was when the rapist didn't turn out to be who it seemed! Whew...had me sweating bullets t. Ca. Can't wait for the next update.