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October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a perfect storie, especially chapter one! Please letter another so cool storie in adult fanfiction net!
For example with Kim Monique and Kims Mom!
For example with Kim Monique and Kims Mom!
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March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Its good, but a lot of words are verry blotchy and unredable. Just to let you know.
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January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it was great reading and i liked the ending...please make can of worms soon ^.^
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March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I will never watch Kim Possible again without thinking of Ron and Kim doing it. This was a really good story, but I could have lived without Drakken raping Kim it was very distrubing. I will look for the sequel though.
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January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah. The Jewel Of Japan has come to AFF.NET, let us rejoice! :P
Nice fic though, Parareru, yet another reminder why you are one of my personal favorite authors! :D
It's quite kinky, at some points, and yet kind of sad, confusing depressing again at other points.
I give it ~****<---4 stars~
Hope to see more of your work soon.
Love always, and forever,
Jewelie
Nice fic though, Parareru, yet another reminder why you are one of my personal favorite authors! :D
It's quite kinky, at some points, and yet kind of sad, confusing depressing again at other points.
I give it ~****<---4 stars~
Hope to see more of your work soon.
Love always, and forever,
Jewelie
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January 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very nice i can't wait for the sequel.
What is your screen name on FF.net i
would very much like to know when it is up.
What is your screen name on FF.net i
would very much like to know when it is up.
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January 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I finally figured out how to leave a review! Now then, on with the review. I really enjoyed this chapter, you even had me making wrong guess throthe the whole thing, and Kim kiling Ron, whoa..and Uno's ID is nagging at me...so it 51 and just everything...you did a great job. And a Happy ending thank you for that.
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January 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Alrighty that was interesting. Uno being from the future and being
sent to save instead of destroy was something i liked a lot. The
only thing that threw me off and actually upset me was Goku. Adding
Dbz to KP was just not meshing. I like the Protector, but having him
be Goku was just not working. All in all this story is really good
and even though you included Dbz in the story it's stiood ood and i can't
wait for the final chapter or the sequel.
P.S.
Is any of the truth about the future coming out in the final chapter like
Shego and Uno, Leviathan, or any of that other stuff.
sent to save instead of destroy was something i liked a lot. The
only thing that threw me off and actually upset me was Goku. Adding
Dbz to KP was just not meshing. I like the Protector, but having him
be Goku was just not working. All in all this story is really good
and even though you included Dbz in the story it's stiood ood and i can't
wait for the final chapter or the sequel.
P.S.
Is any of the truth about the future coming out in the final chapter like
Shego and Uno, Leviathan, or any of that other stuff.
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January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW, DBZ CROSSOVER! THIS RULES! bUT THAT WAS EVIL, HURTIN RON LIKE THAT! UPDATE SOON!
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January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
X-men tech! Goku! Kami! Who is Uno! Sitch in Time echos? Wow! this is great stuff!