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for Clean and Sober

by LadyDetia

schedule December 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*SMirks & Bows* 'twas a pleasre *wiggles eyebrows* working on this one with you Dee. Hope there's more in the future
person Seth C. Triggs
schedule November 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Clean and Sober io puo pun intended) very cleanly written. I also immensely enjoyed the 'action' scenes in the middle, they were endowed with proper amounts of sexual tension - not too much, not too little. It's also clear that muime ime and energy was expended on this story - a great many erotica pieces tend to be 'rush jobs.' Character development is also quite splendid, letting the readers become acquainted with the motivations and temperaments of the primary playeScenScenes are given enough detail where you can feel as if you are in the same room with the characters, watching their interactions.

With all this considered, this story is highly recommended by me, especially as an example of well-written erotica.